goldstar
4:43 Tue Feb 24
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Well done Doug. Looking forward to the next one.
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Son of Anarchy
4:42 Tue Feb 24
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A good effort doug but your who status isnt quite great enough to get the level of responses you need.
Please refer to my thread on the game from sunday formsome hints and tips.
Please make time to respond to all who post on your thread no matter how retarded they seem
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Vinny
4:35 Tue Feb 24
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Great stuff. Keep them going.
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BRANDED
2:58 Tue Feb 24
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THE GHOST OF VINNY
Go for it.
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Tadlad
2:58 Tue Feb 24
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Excellent report, thanks.
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gph
2:46 Tue Feb 24
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It's great to have a report back
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CARTERS
2:28 Tue Feb 24
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DOUGIE,
Well done old lad.
Some of the Plonkers on here can't string three words together so keep on what your doing.
We all miss Vinny but, its nice to have your input.
Don't let some of these moaning Pricks get to you.
They know who they are.
Look forward to your next piece.
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Kelly Smunt
1:52 Tue Feb 24
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Overall it was a good and fair read, but on a pedantic grammatical point Doug, you seem to waver between the first and the third person.You begin by referring to 'West Ham' and 'the Hammers' (third person) then switch to 'we' and 'they' (first person). Sorry, but you did ask for criticism and I'm trying to be objective.
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Allardyce Fan 1
1:42 Tue Feb 24
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Cheers. Will make a cup of coffee (milk, 1 sugar) and read it in a sec.
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Northern Sold
1:39 Tue Feb 24
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I only get an hour for me lunch hour
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Fivetide
1:38 Tue Feb 24
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Thanks for writing this up.
As fr feedback: If this report was available the evening or morning after the game, it would have been the right style. If you prefer spending a couple of days getting it right, then you should turn it into an analysis of themes from the event, rather than a news style report, otherwise people will feel they've read it elsewhere.
Good effort.
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AKA ERNIE
1:33 Tue Feb 24
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doug-wasnt a dig mate do appreciate the work but just try not be too obvious
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Josh
1:33 Tue Feb 24
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Hi Panchoice!
Bit repetitive on here at the moment mostly about the Fat one. Reckon I'll be back soonish, once Sams finally gone.
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DougTheHammer
1:31 Tue Feb 24
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I appreciate the feedback and if any of you are interested I will post one for the Palace game on Saturday. Hopefully I will only get better at establishing my own voice. Cheers.
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Pancho
1:30 Tue Feb 24
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I miss you Josh.
I miss you so much it hurts.
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Josh
1:29 Tue Feb 24
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Decent effort.
With player ratings, a number isn't necessarily needed, people get bogged down on a simple number more so than actual thoughts on how one played.
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crapnotshit
1:28 Tue Feb 24
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Very good try, but as AKA said - too mainstream
Less words, more guts
And, 4 points to Cole - for what? 4 points for coming on?
Ill give him -4, and thats being nice.
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Mr Kenzo
1:25 Tue Feb 24
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Doug if you want people to read your blog, ALWAYS give Noble MOTM
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1:25 Tue Feb 24
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That was good Doug. I thought that it was a balanced view and critique of the match.
I look forward to more match reports.
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LeroysBoots
1:25 Tue Feb 24
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I thought it was ok, well done and thanks for taking the time to compile
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Mr. Burns
1:23 Tue Feb 24
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Well that's you told DOUGIE!
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